寫作(一)_《成人高考專升本英語》考試真題
對于正在備戰(zhàn)成人高考專升本的考生來說,英語寫作往往是備考路上的 “攔路虎”——不知如何搭建框架、常用句型記不牢、面對真題無從下筆。別擔(dān)心!讓我們從歷年真題開始,帶你拆解寫作思路、積累實(shí)用素材,逐步提升寫作能力,離上岸目標(biāo)更近一步!

【題目】你(Li Yuan)組織同學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次燒烤野餐(barbecue)。請給你的英國朋友 Tim 寫一封電子郵件,內(nèi)容包括:
1、野餐前的準(zhǔn)備;
2、野餐過程;
3、印象最深刻的人或事。
【寫作方法】
第一步:精準(zhǔn)拆解題目要求,避免偏離核心
首先要抓住題目中的 3 個關(guān)鍵信息:
1、身份語氣:以Li Yuan給英國朋友Tim寫信,語氣親切,用“I’m writing to...”開頭、“Yours” 結(jié)尾。
2、必寫內(nèi)容:“野餐準(zhǔn)備、過程、印象最深的人/事” 三點(diǎn)缺一不可,是得分關(guān)鍵。
3、字?jǐn)?shù)控制:120 詞內(nèi),每部分 30-40 詞,開頭結(jié)尾各 10 詞左右。
第二步:搭建 “三段式 + 郵件格式” 框架,保證邏輯連貫
英語郵件寫作需先明確基礎(chǔ)格式(稱呼、正文、署名),正文部分可按題目要點(diǎn)拆分為 “三段式”。讓結(jié)構(gòu)更清晰:
正文結(jié)構(gòu):
開頭(1-2 句):直述寫信目的(告知組織燒烤)。
三段核心:①準(zhǔn)備寫分工(買食材、備工具);②過程寫動作 + 氛圍(燒烤、分享、天氣);③印象寫細(xì)節(jié) + 感受(如某人努力烤串的事)。
第三步:優(yōu)化語言表達(dá),適配考試難度
成人高考專升本英語寫作注重 “簡潔、準(zhǔn)確”,無需使用復(fù)雜句式或生僻詞匯,可遵循以下原則:
用基礎(chǔ)句式:以簡單句、并列句(and, but, though)為主,如 “Though some were a bit burnt, we all praised him.”,既表達(dá)邏輯關(guān)系,又容易掌握。
選常見詞匯:食材(meat, veggies, chicken wings)、動作(divide, prepare, grill, share)、感受(impressed, great)等詞匯均為基礎(chǔ)詞匯,避免拼寫錯誤或用詞不當(dāng)。
控制字?jǐn)?shù):寫每句時注意精簡,避免冗余表達(dá),確保整體不超詞。
【郵件答案】
Dear Tim,
I’m writing to tell you about a barbecue I organized for my classmates. Before it, we divided tasks: some bought meat and veggies, others prepared tools and drinks. I made a shopping list to avoid missing anything.
During the picnic, we grilled chicken wings and corn together. Everyone laughed while sharing food and stories. The weather was perfect—sunny but not hot.
What impressed me most was Tom. He’s not good at cooking, but he tried hard to grill burgers. Though some were a bit burnt, we all praised him. It was a great day!
Yours,
Li Yuan
【常用句子】
開頭引入事件:I’m writing to share with you an interesting activity I organized recently—...
準(zhǔn)備階段:We made full preparations for it. Some of us...while others...
過程描述:During the activity, we...and enjoyed a wonderful time together. Everyone was in high spirits.
印象深刻部分:What left the deepest impression on me was.../The most unforgettable part was...
結(jié)尾:It was such a great experience that I wanted to tell you right away.



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